The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
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The table shows the sources of the police budget for a particular area in Britain,
while
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the pie chart illustrates how the
money
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was distributed for three purposes in two years, 2017 and 2018.
Overall
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, the budget for the police has grown, with most of the
money
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allocated to the national government. The number of
money
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from salaries of officers and staff was higher than technology, and building and transport. Regarding the table, the national government contributed 175.5
million
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pounds
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in 2017.
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, it still kept rising and reached 177.5
million
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pounds
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in 2018. There was a minimal increase from 91.2 to 102.3
million
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pounds
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in two years in the amount of local taxes. In 2017, 38
million
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pounds
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came from other sources, like grants, and
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the quantity of
money
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for sources extra 500,000
pounds
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in 2018. The total police budget climbed from 304.7 to 318.6
million
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. Looking at the pie chart, spending on construction and vehicles remains unchanged at 17% over a year. Technology witnessed a rise from 8% to 14%.
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, there was a decrease of 6% in the
money
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of salaries for officers and staff.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, million, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • funding sources
  • government policies
  • economic conditions
  • community services
  • crime prevention
  • public safety
  • significant increase/decrease
  • distribution
  • assessment
  • reflection
  • allocation shifts
  • budget comparison
  • impact analysis
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