It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Punishment

has been one of the important

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of disciplining

children

for a long time. There is a belief that punishing kids is crucial to teach them what is

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and what

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the

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proper

behaviours. I tend to think that punishing

children

would be useful in disciplining them;

however

, the

way

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is of prime importance. 

To begin

with, some might argue that exerting too much pressure on

children

at an early age to teach them about right and wrong

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behaviours is

behaviours

behaviour is

not a good

way

of disciplining them, because

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that age they may become sick and tired of these issues and it can have reverse effects.

However

,

although

this

argument is valid, psychologically speaking early ages are the best time to

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everything to

children

because they are more curious and incentive

about learning

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new things.

Furthermore

,

punishment

not only is necessary

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the process of

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disciplining

but

also

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in

this

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because a child will understand the differences between right and wrong. To illustrate the point, consider a 5-year-old

boy

whose parents try to teach him to be a good member

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the

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society and treat other

children

in

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best

way

possible. When

this

boy

receive

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a gift,

for

instance

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a toy, for being kind

with

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his peer groups in

this

way

he

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to repeat

this

course of action again and when

this

boy

is prohibited

to play

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from playing

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with his play station because he

used

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swear words

this

boy

can understand the differences between his actions and how different results they can bring about.

However

, not any kind of

punishment

is effective. Physical punishments,

for instance

, are completely wrong because

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may exert destructive effects and make

children

to

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take revenge, so

it

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may bring about reverse effects.

By contrast

, there are many well-established ways of punishing that experience has shown are effective and will not

make

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trouble.

For instance

, prohibit

children

from playing with their technological devices or asking them to spend two or three hours in their own room. These methods will be more effective and safe. In conclusion, I tend to think that

punishment

is necessary for

desciplining

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disciplining

children

and early ages are the best period to teach

children

how

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between right and wrong.

Nevertheless

, physical

punishment

should not be considered at all and other methods seem more effective.