The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie diagram illustrates the distribution of various factors that are mainly responsible for making people more happy in numerous age gaps.
Overall
, success at the workplace and performing their favourite jobs are most prominent
while
economic issues, journeys, and many more factors
also
help
public
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the public
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to become happy.
Firstly
, the proportion of prospects in job sectors is 31% when society
are
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under 30
however
, the part is 32% when they become over 30. The case of fulfilling hobbies at the same age shows a similar trend
whereas
the percentage increases by 2% from low to high age.
On the other hand
,
crowd
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the crowd
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who are under 30 prefer to travel more around the world,
in contrast
, whenever they reach the 30, they try to spend more moments with their family and the proportion is 15% and 14% respectively.
In addition
, economic issues are highly significant in making a person happy and the results shown in the chart where that folk over 30 consider more financial security. At the same time, there are other issues which help a person to be happy but these values decreased over time, from 14% to 10%.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • age groups
  • responses
  • happiness factors
  • participants
  • contribute
  • compare
  • patterns
  • differences
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