some people think that it is a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends . other people think it is important to keep working life completely separate from social life . discuss both these views and give youe own opinion .
While
a group of people
enjoy spending time
with their coworkers after work
or on holidays, others emphasize that it is essential for a person to divide his or her professional and personal aspects. The former group think
that since we spent the majority of our working days with our colleagues, they Wrong verb form
thought
are
among the closest Wrong verb form
were
people
to us, and the latter group put stress on conflict prevention.
Spending more than 40 hours a week with people
who
you do not resonate with is simply not pleasurable. Many workers develop personal Change the pronoun
whom
bond
with their colleagues. They become friends Fix the agreement mistake
bonds
and
share their thoughts and sometimes spend Correct word choice
apply
time
together. This
helps them with having a better time
in the work space
. In Correct your spelling
workspace
this
regard, the advocates of such
notion
argue that a personal relationship with coworkers can contribute to a better and healthier Correct article usage
a notion
work
environment. Although
the contribution is true, this
should not be misunderstood with
a romantic relationship. Personally, I try to be amicable in my job. Change preposition
in
For instance
, sharing interests or having a coffee from time
to time
have
contributed Correct subject-verb agreement
has
in
Change preposition
to
a
better mental health in my life.
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On the other hand
, there is a more strict view that agrees with the separation of work
and social life. They say that friendships in Correct article usage
the work
work space
have Correct your spelling
workspace
detrimental
effect on the efficiency of workers in various aspects. Every friendship may turn into a partnership, which is totally unacceptable in many circumstances. Or even worse, friends may turn into enemies. Companies do not like to take the risk of two adversary Add an article
a detrimental
people
being
working on the same thing together. Unnecessary verb
apply
This
immensely deteriorates their professional outcome. Hence
, I simply understand why many successful people
detest the notion of friendship in work place
.
In conclusion, it is important to know that whether you shape a friendship with coworkers, frankly because it feels much better in life, or avoid social interaction with colleagues, in order to avoid future conflicts, it is essential to keep your moral and personal boundaries.Correct your spelling
the workplace
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