The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in Netherland between 2001 and 2006. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate. Write at least 150 words.

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The table shows changes in the average

miles

travelled

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different transportation methods in

Netherlands

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the Netherlands

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from 2001 to 2006.

Overall

, it is evident that the most popular mode of travel in both years was a car.

Furthermore

, all the distances grew throughout the years, except for walking, riding a bicycle and a local bus. The total distance

traveled

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by all modes significantly increased from 4740 in 2001 to 6475 in 2006,

however

, despite

this

, three modes decreased in

number

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miles

travelled. These were, walking, which slightly dropped by 48

miles

, bicycle, which decreased by 10% and local bus, which dropped by 50% from 429 to 274, respectively. In terms of other means of

traveling

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car

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the car

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indicated the most popularity among others in both years,

in addition

, it significantly grew in terms of

miles

travelled reaching almost 5000.

Similarly

, local distance

bus

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buses

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more than doubled in

miles

and

taxi

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taxis

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tripled from 13 to 42, respectively.

In addition

distance

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the distance

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travelled by train increased in the period given by 126

miles

. All other modes increased as well, indicating 585

miles

in 2006, which is 135

miles

more than it used to be in 2001.

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