In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this ? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
These days many
companies
and businesses assert that they produce new and special Use synonyms
things
during their advertisement. They do Use synonyms
this
to rival Linking Words
with
other Change preposition
apply
companies
for bestselling. Use synonyms
Also
in my Linking Words
view
their action could have both positive and negative Add a comma
view,
development
.
In Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the modern
modern
era there is a wide range of stuff for people to choose Correct article usage
the modern
Change preposition
from and
and
buy. So businesses try to emphasize that they have a new and distinguished product to Change preposition
from and
can
compete with other Verb problem
apply
companies
. Use synonyms
In
Linking Words
addition
they absorb Add a comma
addition,
people
attention to have bestselling and good profit of their Change noun form
people's
products
. Use synonyms
For instance
, there are many cosmetic brands around the world which regularly present and produce new kinds of Linking Words
products
in relation to skin or hair care and they have high income Use synonyms
of
it.
As far as Change preposition
from
development
is Use synonyms
considered
, Making and producing new Verb problem
concerned
things
have some prose and cones. In terms of positive Use synonyms
development
, Use synonyms
companies
try to manufacture new Use synonyms
things
with high quality and reasonable Use synonyms
price
to compete with others. it is profitable for customers too and they can access Fix the agreement mistake
prices
to
various Change preposition
apply
high quality
goods. Add a hyphen
high-quality
While
in the past they used to buy limited types of Linking Words
products
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, in some cases, just producing new items without any right thought behind it or Linking Words
do
not Verb problem
apply
spend
appropriate time to research and evaluate them , I think is considered as a negative Wrong verb form
spending
development
. Because it leads to Use synonyms
produce
Wrong verb form
producing
low quality
Add a hyphen
low-quality
things
. Use synonyms
For example
, there are some health Linking Words
products
which Use synonyms
using
primary ones Wrong verb form
use
cause
many health problems and allergies for people. Because the company do not consider and examine the whole side effects in Correct pronoun usage
that cause
short
time.
In conclusion, many brands emphasize Add an article
a short
on
manufacturing new goods to achieve better Change preposition
apply
selling
and income. I think Replace the word
sales
this
action in some cases Linking Words
have
positive Change the verb form
has
development
Use synonyms
while
in other cases might lead to negative Linking Words
development
.Use synonyms
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