the maps below show a coal mine and its redevelopment into a visitors attraction site.

The map displays the redevelopment plan for a coal

mine

to turn it into a tourist attraction.

Overall

, the parking lot in the southwest corner will be the only point of interest that

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stay the same

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the rest of the area will

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into a tourist spot. To be more specific, focusing on the left side of the coal

mine

, on the site of the current office and staff's changing room in the northwest corner, there is a plan for the construction of a museum.

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the medical room in the centre would soon

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by a coffee shop, with a footpath

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leading to it. The

foot path

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would be situated where the lorry park currently is.

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the coal

mine

in the upper middle of the area will

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for visitors' use. On the right side of the coal

mine

, currently, stands two waste pits. In the future, it is the goal to turn the northeast waste pit into a truck driving track.

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, the southeast waste pit is going to

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into a picnic area with a children's playground. The children's playground would occupy the southeast corner

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the picnic areas

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directly east, above the playground