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Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport. However, it is no longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population?

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Using a
bicycle
 brings a lot of benefits
in
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 our body and environment, but it is no longer the main
tranport
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transport
 on the
road
. I believe
this
 is
due to
 the convenience and fast options that we have available
such
 as cars and trains. If there were more lanes for cyclists on the
road
, it may encourage
people
 to
use
this
 as transportation by many. Some of the benefits of using a
bicycle
includes
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improvement
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 of the cardiovascular muscles of a person because of peddling, and since it does not need fuel, it is environment-friendly.
In addition
, They could
also
 avoid
the
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heavy traffic because of the slim frame of the vehicle. Despite these advantages,
people
 still choose to
use
 other modes of transportation like cars and trains because of the fast and convenient way to get to their destinations as they do not need to carry it around. One way to encourage individuals to
use
this
 form of transportation is to ensure that they have their own lanes in most of the
road
 paths, to provide security to
cyclist
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cyclists
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.
Moreover
, proper
bicycle
 stands in public
area
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 would help riders to have their own space for their vehicle
,
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 and
do
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not need to tag it
along with
 them. Spreading awareness about the
benifit
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benefits
benefit
this
 would bring
our
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 health and environment may catch the attention of many individuals. In conclusion, the time saved and convenience that other
mode
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 of
transportations
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transportation
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 stop
people
 from using
bicycle
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bicycles
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. In my opinion, providing a space and respect
on
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cyclist
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 on the
road
 may push
people
 to
use
 bikes again,
as well as
 informing them
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 positive changes
this
 will bring to the body and environment.
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