The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001.

The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001.
The table shows different categories of monthly spending for an
Australian
family in 1991 and 2001. The different categories include food, electricity and water, clothing, housing, transport and other goods/services.
Overall
, the total spending has increased over the span of 10 years from 1991 to 2001. For both years, money is mostly spent on other goods and services. Meanwhile spending on clothing contributed the least to total expenditure for both years. Focusing on the year 1991
first,
the highest money spent is on other goods, sitting at 250
Australian
Dollars
a month.
This
is
then
followed by food at 155
Australian
Dollars
. Housing, electricity water and transport
consequently
come
next,
each at 95, 75 and 70
Australian
dollars
respectively. Clothing takes the
last
place at 30
Australian
Dollars
. Moving on to the year 2001, there has been an increase of 40
dollars
in total spending, from 675 to 715
Australian
Dollars
in the ten-year gap. Spending on other items continued to take the top spot, experiencing an increase of 20
dollars
, bringing it up to 270
Australian
Dollars
.
Next,
this
is followed by food electricity and water which have both drastically grown to 160 and 120
Australian
Dollars
respectively. Expenditure on housing
also
experienced a small increase of 5
dollars
, to 100
Australian
Dollars
.
However
, though, expenditure on transport has dipped significantly, dropping from 70 to 45
Australian
Dollars
.
This
trend can
also
be seen with clothing with a decrease down to 20
Australian
Dollars
a month.
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