The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which was result from this energy use.

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represents

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how

energy

is used and the greenhouse gas emissions which result from the

energy

use in an average Australian family, measured in per cent.

Overall

,

it is clear that

majority

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the majority

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of people in

this

country utilize

energy

for heating

and

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followed by water heating

whereas

they

are

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rarely use it for cooling.

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that product

to make

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body

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felt

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warm

did

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not produce a lot of carbon emissions like

what

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water heating did.

Thing

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for

reduce

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heat used by 2% and

create

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more

a

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per cent

pollutions

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, yet for regelation’s emission

accountanted

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accountant

accountants

accounted

twofold

similarly

with lighting that manufactured more contamination in gas.

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,

other

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instruments nearly a sixth experienced climb roughly two times.

However

, Australian

menage

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men

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make use of

energy

in

heating

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the heating

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area (42%), but accomplished declines enormously when it comes to

pollute

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pollution

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(15%). From what we can see, four out of five

Australian’s

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adepted

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adapted

adopted

rises.