The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
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The bar chart represents how regularly citizens in America ate in fast
food
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restaurants in a 10-year period, measured in per cent.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the majority of people go to fast
food
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stores once a week, once or twice a month, and several times per seven days experienced rises,
while
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the percentage of those who “never” and “every day” went to
such
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places had diminished trend. Persons who ate fast
food
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once a week and once or twice a month consummated roughly 31% and 30% by 2003,
whereas
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in 2006 people that consumed
such
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food
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in a seven daily period levelled up marginally to just beyond 30%, the other groups dropped considerably in the same year;
however
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, the change trends in 2013.
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, the several times a week category had a plateau situation in a decade which made its top in exactly one-fifth. As regards, society eating a few times a year had escalated steadily from just under 15% to stabilise at the exact 15% later by 2006 and 2013. The “never” and “every day” classifications plunged marginally throughout the year before levelling off in the remaining seven years.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "marginally" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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