The number of advertisements for charities on television and the internet seems to be increasing. What is causing this ? Is this a positive or negative development ? Give reasons for your answer & include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
The donations have been increasing through media and social media. The main element of advertising is a plethora of poor countries in the world.
This
effect change
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changes
in
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apply
people
's lives better. However
, the basic needs can help
by the money for the pupils. Wrong verb form
be helped
Besides
this
, it can also
help to secure the community. This
essay will elaborate on both perspectives in the upcoming paragraphs.
A number of philanthropists are
collect the funds and distribute Unnecessary verb
apply
to
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them to
the
needy Correct article usage
apply
people
. They protect their lives as well as
give essential
necessities. Correct pronoun usage
them essential
Therefore
, they make some fund raising
programs and Correct your spelling
fundraising
encourages
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encourage
to
the nation. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, they collaborate with various brands to help them in education for children, so they can build education centers
and grant them. Change the spelling
centres
Moreover
, they attract society for advertisement through social platforms and print media to support poor one's
. Change noun form
ones
Consequently
, they aid from different forums for the purpose to develop
the poor society.
Apart from that, there are Change preposition
of developing
such
aid programs who
have been looting Correct pronoun usage
that
people
in the name of charity. Those schemes are involved in wealth gathered for self interest
. Despite of, the charity trust Add a hyphen
self-interest
has
not accountable for ingoing and outgoing cash so most Verb problem
is
people
avoid to
the funds. Not only the trust issues but Change preposition
apply
also
no law forum to control the assets of the trust. Therefore
, the negative aspect of the
charity schemes may not Correct article usage
apply
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be favorable
favorable
to Change the spelling
favourable
the
society.
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apply
To conclude
, the
donation Correct article usage
apply
is
a significant role in the public and motivates Verb problem
play
of
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apply
people
to grant helping
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help
people
. But it has negative
impact Add an article
a negative
more
rather than Correct quantifier usage
apply
positive
that there is no check and balance for currency so it should make a law to enforce the transparency of the assets. Correct article usage
a positive
Then
everyone can freely support to
the helping nations.Change preposition
apply
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