The chart shows the proportion of working-age adults in four countries from 1960 to 2050 predicted.
The figure illustrates the percentage of the
overall
working-age adult population in four countries (France
, United States, Japan, Germany) from 1960 to 2050. Overall
, all four countries are forecasted to decrease
in 2050. At the start of the period, Germany and Japan were in the first and second places, respectively. In contrast
, France
and the United States occupied the last
two positions, but France
was 3 percent
higher. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, in the future, they are all predicted to decrease
.
In 1960, the percentage of the working-age population in Japan was 65%. Then
it showed a steep rise and reached its peak at 70% in 1990, after which it fell dramatically and is predicted to continue this
trend. As for Germany, which was at the top in 1960, it showed a decrease
by 1970, followed by an increase and reaching its highest point in 1990. However
, the graph shows a steady decrease
that will continue.
France
, which was third in the ranking, demonstrated an increase but is predicted to fall in the future and will occupy the second position. Regarding the data shown for the United States, it is similar to France
, but it will occupy the first place at the end
of the predicted period.Submitted by aikumarbekarys on
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