The number of endangered species has increased significantly in this century and we find more mass extinctions in this period than in any other period of time. State some reasons for this and provide possible solutions.

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getting endangered have risen in numbers

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century, and it’s more than

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other century in the past. There are two main causes, increasing human encroachment in

wildlife

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areas and killing wild

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for their personal and economic benefits. Possible solutions would be to have

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highly scrutinized by the government and enforce strict punishments to the poachers. One of the main

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for

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species

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getting endangered is human selfishness and the desire to take on more land. Owing to the rising population and the need for additional land to cater to

ever-increasing

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demand for housing and urban infrastructure, justifies the need to cut

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for human habitat. In India,

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, the sole Asiatic lion

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was on

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of extinction because human developmental projects were displacing lions out of their natural ecology, leading to disturbance in

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chain and in the long run, leading to more deaths.

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can be tackled with strict rules enforced by governments to not allow developments in

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wildlife designated

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zones, which is the key

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survival without affecting their food chain. Another major reason that needs to be considered is human motives to satisfy their personal needs and maintain their status symbols. These days,

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of health and beauty products contain extract of

animals

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products which eventually is the leading reason for

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wildlife

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population and at times making it

endanered

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endangered

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exinct

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extinct

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, in developing countries, animals like tigers and elephants are poached for making clothes, jewellery and rugs which

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symbol of royalty. One way

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can be addressed by

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is to enforce stricter rules and punishments to the poachers and develop understanding using school education.

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wildlife

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sanctuary

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and state park needs to be highly regulated and policed to catch the

perpetuators

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of crime. In conclusion, the rise in endangered

species

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is caused mainly

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humans requiring to satisfy their selfish needs of urban development and their needs of jewellery and beauty products extracted from animal byproducts.

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would need to put a check on permissions for new land development projects,

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at the same time

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stricter punishments for violators in

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wildlife designated

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zones.