The amount of garbage produced by our cities is a big problem for governments around the world. How can this problem be solved?

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ㅤThese days, local citizens keep dirty their village
that is
why our town is not clean. To write the truth, my family and I keep clean our home and street.
Nevertheless
, some neighbours are not safe with their homes tidy. I reckon it is the reason for the
garbage
produced by our cities. Not only our street,
however
, some citizens of our country like them. At
first,
a
garbage
truck did not come for about a month. The truck came once a week before. It is the second reason for
garbage
production. I think it is the
government
's fault because they do not control their work.
Therefore
, these days our village and some places in our country are very dirty. To resolve the problem, I request that a
garbage
truck would come to our and other villages twice a week. I reckon
then
, our streets would be clean and look beautiful. I would be grateful if the
government
read
this
essay and I hope my essay would reach the
government
. If the
government
can not resolve the problem, our population will be sick when they live in a dirty place or at home. I am afraid of
this
problem. Since I want to live to be healthy and without problems. In conclusion, I must say that our local people need to save their village. Not only our local people but people all over the world.
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