You wish to apply for a new college course, but you are unsure about the details of cost, duration and subjects posted on the college website. Write an email to the relevant person in administration of the college, asking them to clarify these points for you. In this email, •Say what your interested is • Explain why the website is unclear • Request the information that you need.

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
email finds you well. I am writing to express my keen interest in courses offered by your college and seek your assistance in clarifying some points. I am applying for the Accounting Diploma Program which I believe aligns with my previous qualifications and experience.
However
, upon visiting the college website, it seems that details of tuition fees,
course
duration and
course
content are insufficient.
Firstly
,
according to
the website, the cost of the Accounting Diploma Program is listed as $3,500. I would like to understand whether
this
tuition fee pertains to the entire
course
or is applicable only to one semester. Could you please make
this
point clear?
Secondly
, the website mentions that the
course
runs from “Summer to Autumn”.
Nevertheless
, specific start and end dates are unavailable.
Therefore
, I would appreciate it if you could provide me with precise information regarding
this
matter.
Lastly
, I am eager to gain insight into the
course
content so I would like you to furnish me with an overview of the topics covered in
this
program. It would greatly assist me in comprehending the scope and focus of the
course
. I look forward to your response. Thank you for considering my request. Kind regards, Lana Nguyen
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