The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates how people budged in Britain in 2017 in 2018. The table explains how is become
this
money is usable. Moreover
, the pie shows where the money was spent.
Overall
, it is clear that
government nations more than other sources from 2017 to 2018. Also
, some providers had already the most expensive.
First of all, in 2017 govern states gave the officials police largest power over 175,8£. While
in 2018, he raised it to 177,8. However
, there increase in local texts in 2017 and 2018, wish went up from 91,23 to 102.3. As a result
, the total number was also
higher in 2018 than in 2017.
In addition
, the costs of sellers for police stations,
were the main concern which was 75%. Remove the comma
apply
On the other hand
, in 2018 there was a reduction of 15% to expand the technology world, was
just 9% to become 40%.
Correct pronoun usage
which was
Although
, the restructure and vertical were in the same percentage the range was 17% in 2018, and 2017, which is considerable for humanSubmitted by ra18d.ai on
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