Some people think that spending a lot of money on wedding parties and other celebrations is just a waste. Others, however, think that such events are necessary, so spending money on them is acceptable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays,
people
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want to show off and create a good reputation in society, so they spend a
lot
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of
money
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on festivals and wedding parties. Some
people
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spend a
lot
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of cash for enjoyment, and others spend it out of fear of society. I think spending a
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of
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on them is a waste of
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. In
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essay, I will explain it in detail in the next paragraph.
Firstly
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, rich
people
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easily spend a
lot
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of amount on weddings and other celebrations. They have a
lot
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of funds and are earning from business.
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, as per Times of India reports,
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Makesh Ambaini spent 500
crore
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on his daughter's wedding.
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, rich
people
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are easily spent, but middle-class or poor
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have less
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.
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, middle-class
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are earning
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from their salaries. They have limited cash because of them. If they want to spend more
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, they need only two options: save
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or borrow a loan, which is not easy.
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,
according to
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a survey by BBC News, every year ten million
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attempt suicide or go into depression
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spending
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more than their salary and taking loans from banks at high rates of interest. In conclusion, everybody has the right to enjoy their lives and do everything on their mind.
People
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are spending the
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based on our bedsheets. I know enjoyment is a must, but if you save the
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for the future and
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your needs rather than waste it on
celebration
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the celebration
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, We are doing it for a good reputation and to show off, but some
people
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are never happy that you did it for them; they always try to find your mistake.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extravagant
  • waste of money
  • financial burden
  • priorities
  • materialistic values
  • unrealistic expectations
  • special occasion
  • celebration
  • strengthening relationships
  • social bonds
  • boosting local economies
  • creating jobs
  • lasting memories
  • financial responsibility
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