Some people think that spending a lot of money on wedding parties and other celebrations is just a waste. Others, however, think that such events are necessary, so spending money on them is acceptable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Nowadays,
people
want to show off and create a good reputation in society, so they spend a lot
of money
on festivals and wedding parties. Some people
spend a lot
of cash for enjoyment, and others spend it out of fear of society. I think spending a lot
of money
on them is a waste of money
. In this
essay, I will explain it in detail in the next paragraph.
Firstly
, rich people
easily spend a lot
of amount on weddings and other celebrations. They have a lot
of funds and are earning from business. For example
, as per Times of India reports, Mr.
Makesh Ambaini spent 500 Change the punctuation
Mr
crore
on his daughter's wedding. Change to a plural noun
crores
Thus
, rich people
are easily spent, but middle-class or poor people
have less money
.
Secondly
, middle-class people
are earning money
from their salaries. They have limited cash because of them. If they want to spend more money
, they need only two options: save money
or borrow a loan, which is not easy. For instance
, according to
a survey by BBC News, every year ten million people
attempt suicide or go into depression due to
spending money
more than their salary and taking loans from banks at high rates of interest.
In conclusion, everybody has the right to enjoy their lives and do everything on their mind. People
are spending the money
based on our bedsheets. I know enjoyment is a must, but if you save the money
for the future and fulfill
your needs rather than waste it on Change the spelling
fulfil
celebration
, We are doing it for a good reputation and to show off, but some Add an article
the celebration
people
are never happy that you did it for them; they always try to find your mistake.Submitted by lavneet.kumar45 on
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