Some people think that spending a lot of money on wedding parties and other celebrations is just a waste. Others, however, think that such events are necessary, so spending money on them is acceptable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,
people
want to show off and create a good reputation in society, so they spend a
lot
of
money
on festivals and wedding parties. Some
people
spend a
lot
of cash for enjoyment, and others spend it out of fear of society. I think spending a
lot
of
money
on them is a waste of
money
. In
this
essay, I will explain it in detail in the next paragraph.
Firstly
, rich
people
easily spend a
lot
of amount on weddings and other celebrations. They have a
lot
of funds and are earning from business.
For example
, as per Times of India reports,
Mr.
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Makesh Ambaini spent 500
crore
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crores
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on his daughter's wedding.
Thus
, rich
people
are easily spent, but middle-class or poor
people
have less
money
.
Secondly
, middle-class
people
are earning
money
from their salaries. They have limited cash because of them. If they want to spend more
money
, they need only two options: save
money
or borrow a loan, which is not easy.
For instance
,
according to
a survey by BBC News, every year ten million
people
attempt suicide or go into depression
due to
spending
money
more than their salary and taking loans from banks at high rates of interest. In conclusion, everybody has the right to enjoy their lives and do everything on their mind.
People
are spending the
money
based on our bedsheets. I know enjoyment is a must, but if you save the
money
for the future and
fulfill
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your needs rather than waste it on
celebration
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, We are doing it for a good reputation and to show off, but some
people
are never happy that you did it for them; they always try to find your mistake.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extravagant
  • waste of money
  • financial burden
  • priorities
  • materialistic values
  • unrealistic expectations
  • special occasion
  • celebration
  • strengthening relationships
  • social bonds
  • boosting local economies
  • creating jobs
  • lasting memories
  • financial responsibility
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