The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarize and information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing
cement
and concrete, to be Use synonyms
further
used for construction purposes, Linking Words
as well as
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equipment
involved in it.
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the equipment
Overall
, with a lot of equipment involved, Linking Words
production
of Correct article usage
the production
cement
is far more complex than that of concrete. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, to make the Linking Words
cement
one will need only two ingredients, namely, limestone and clay, Use synonyms
whereas
for the concrete four are needed.
In order to make Linking Words
cement
, limestone and clay are crushed, followed by the resulting powder being mixed. After that, the substance is passed through a rotating heater and Use synonyms
subsequently
milled in a grinder. The ready substance, called Linking Words
cement
, is Use synonyms
finally
packed in bags, so Linking Words
as
it can be Correct word choice
that
further
transported.
As regards concrete, to produce it one needs four ingredients, Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
cement
, water, sand and gravel. Water and Use synonyms
cement
make up the smallest proportions at 10% and 15% respectively, Use synonyms
while
sand and gravel together comprise three-quarters of the concrete mass, half consisting of the small stones. Having been put in the concrete mixer, all of these substances are blended, which results in obtaining concrete.Linking Words
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