Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think that it has led to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays new technologies are a crucial part of our

lives

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. Some

people

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argue that technological advancement has changed their

lives

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positively, at the same

time

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others feel that technology has started to control their

lives

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. In

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essay, I will overview both opinions and give my own in the conclusion.

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with, technological developments help to make

people

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lives

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easier. Currently, it is hard to realise our

lives

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without computers and smartphones .

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, three or four decades earlier

people

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couldn't imagine communicating with

people

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from different countries would be so easy , but for modern

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people

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it is nothing special.

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invention

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the invention

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of home gadgets helps housewife save their

time

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and energy and spend

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time

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for self-treatment.

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, some

people

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still have an opinion that new technologies have a negative influence on our

lifestyleand

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lifestyle and

lifestyle

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, control it.

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is because today more and more individuals, especially youngsters, spend their

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online , rather than communicating in real life. The population are influenced by the information they see or read on social media . Some items , like washing machines or vacuum cleaners are now vital. Individuals become addicted to technology. In conclusion,

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people

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today

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dependent on some technological items, my opinion is that there are more positive aspects , like convenience and

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-saving, than negative. With technological

advancement

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advancement,

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our

live

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became

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have become

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easier in many

ytimes

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times

. It is a personal choice of everyone , to use gadgets to make our life easier

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or be controlled or addicted.

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task response

Address both opinions clearly and provide a balanced perspective. Ensure that the main points flow logically and are well-supported with examples.

coherence cohesion

The introduction and conclusion are present but lack clarity and focus. Work on providing a more cohesive structure throughout the essay.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

257 words

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