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The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.

The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.
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The chart illustrates relevant data about eight individual species of birds seen in Woodchuck
county
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County
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 during different times of the year
especifically
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specifically
winter
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 and
summer
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.
Overall
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,
Summer
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 is the time in which most of the types of birds can be seen which differs from
winter
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 with just four species seen.
In addition
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 to
this
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, 3 types of birds which are cardinals, crows and woodpeckers appear to be seen
on
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in
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 both
winter
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 and
summer
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. The graph
also
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 shows that bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles,
vireos
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and vireos
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 showed themselves to the public only in
Summer
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 in comparison to
winter
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 in which only juncos seem to appear in the County.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words winter, summer with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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