The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.
The chart illustrates relevant data about eight individual species of birds seen in Woodchuck
county
during different times of the year Capitalize word
County
especifically
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specifically
winter
and summer
.
Overall
, Summer
is the time in which most of the types of birds can be seen which differs from winter
with just four species seen. In addition
to this
, 3 types of birds which are cardinals, crows and woodpeckers appear to be seen on
both Change preposition
in
winter
and summer
.
The graph also
shows that bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles, vireos
showed themselves to the public only in Correct word choice
and vireos
Summer
in comparison to winter
in which only juncos seem to appear in the County.Submitted by lily.pdr15 on
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