The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below
The graph illustrates the differences in the percentage of citizens smoking per 1000 people in Someland over the period of 40 years between 1960 and 2000.
Looking at the chart, it is undeniable that men had the largest smoking rate,
while
the figure for women appeared to be the least popular in most survey years.
On the one hand, the total of female smokers accounted for 100 at the beginning of the year, followed by men’s smoking rate of 600, which was six times higher than the statistic for women. Linking Words
However
, there was a moderate rise in women's smoking rates during the first half of the period, after which they began to drop slowly to 200 people in the Linking Words
last
month.
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On the other hand
, the rates of men smoking decreased gradually after reaching the lowest point at 250, which was higher than the sum for females by approximately 50 people.Linking Words
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