Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In addition

to studying core

subjects

, subordinate

subjects

also

support

students

to be

independence

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by having essential social

skills

.

However

, it is claimed that learning necessary

skills

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outside

by

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parental guidelines is more effective than that by

schools

, so these

schools

should remove subordinate themes

out

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the programs to concentrate on the main

subjects

. In my opinion, I totally agree with

this

idea, which depends on the effectiveness and the time-consuming in studying progress. The

reasons

are going to be analyzed and evaluated in

this

essay.

First,

one of the main

reasons

why some

parents

or

students

disagree with removing subordinate

subjects

is effectiveness.

Also

, they believe that overwhelming

works

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and lack of ability in both

of

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knowledge and teaching are the main

reasons

to learn from them.

Parent

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and

friends

cannot spend

the

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large time instructing them to be effective, and they cannot

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basically

as

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schools

.

Therefore

,

schools

are the best places to study these social

skills

.

However

,

students

are not be

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over in need to have

basical

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basic

knowledge of these

skills

. They

just

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only understand and apply commonly when working in practice, so the

abillities

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abilities

from

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all of

parents

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their parents

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and

friends

are suitable to inspire.

Moreover

, teaching social

skills

is time-consuming for learners to be able to work simply.

For instance

,

parents

can teach cooking for their sons when they are preparing breakfast or dinner

everyday

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, which instructs gradually.

Second,

one of the

reasons

why

students

should

be learned

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cookery, dressmaking, woodwork, and other social

skills

is

the

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simplicity. In fact, pupils will not

be

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difficult to study

by

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their

parents

and their

friends

. The comfort and

famililarity

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familiarity

make them more effective

instead

of being depressed to approach

a high scores

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at

schools

.

In addition

, not only

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uncomplicated

,

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but

also

in saving

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time. They can take more time to

concentrare

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concentrate

on studying their academic

subjects

, whilst the equality of learning social

skills

in their houses will not be lower because they can learn and work regularly. In conclusion, I totally agree that social

skills

should be taught by family and

friends

instead

of the

schools

, which relies on the effectiveness and the time-consuming

in

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studying process.