Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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to studying core

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, subordinate

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also

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support

students

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to be

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by having essential social

skills

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.

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, it is claimed that learning necessary

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in

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outside

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parental guidelines is more effective than that by

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, so these

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should remove subordinate themes

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the programs to concentrate on the main

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. In my opinion, I totally agree with

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idea, which depends on the effectiveness and the time-consuming in studying progress. The

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are going to be analyzed and evaluated in

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essay.

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one of the main

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why some

parents

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or

students

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disagree with removing subordinate

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is effectiveness.

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, they believe that overwhelming

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and lack of ability in both

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knowledge and teaching are the main

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to learn from them.

Parent

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and

friends

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cannot spend

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large time instructing them to be effective, and they cannot

educate

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basically

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schools

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.

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,

schools

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are the best places to study these social

skills

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.

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,

students

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are not be

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over in need to have

basical

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basic

knowledge of these

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. They

just

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only understand and apply commonly when working in practice, so the

abillities

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abilities

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all of

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parents

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their parents

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and

friends

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are suitable to inspire.

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, teaching social

skills

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is time-consuming for learners to be able to work simply.

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,

parents

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can teach cooking for their sons when they are preparing breakfast or dinner

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, which instructs gradually.

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one of the

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why

students

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should

be learned

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cookery, dressmaking, woodwork, and other social

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is

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simplicity. In fact, pupils will not

be

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difficult to study

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with

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their

parents

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and their

friends

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. The comfort and

famililarity

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familiarity

make them more effective

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of being depressed to approach

a high scores

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at

schools

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.

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, not only

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uncomplicated

,

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but

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in saving

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time. They can take more time to

concentrare

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concentrate

on studying their academic

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, whilst the equality of learning social

skills

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in their houses will not be lower because they can learn and work regularly. In conclusion, I totally agree that social

skills

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should be taught by family and

friends

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instead

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of the

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, which relies on the effectiveness and the time-consuming

in

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studying process.