The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given. The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
The chart illustrates the differences in the usage of mobile
phones
and landlines
per 100 people in seven countries.
Overall
, the number of both landlines
and mobile phones
in Denmark was over 80, which showed the dominant figure for landlines
. In contrast
, the biggest users of mobile phones
are the Italians, while
landlines
are only used by 41 per 100 people, the lowest number.
On the one hand, the landlines
in the US and Sweden had the same total of 69. However
, those in the UK and Germany demonstrated similar statistics of 59 and 60, respectively. Moreover
, Sweden, Italy, and the UK are the three leading countries for mobile phones
.
In conclusion, it seems that mobile phone use is higher in Europe than in North America.Submitted by phthaoo
on
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