The graph and chart below give information about species extinctions and the treats to plant life. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph and chart show information about natural events impacting plant life in tropical
forest
and Fix the agreement mistake
forests
extinctions
of plant and animal species in tropical Correct article usage
the extinctions
forest
between 2000 and 2100. Fix the agreement mistake
forests
Overall
, it is predicted in the future that the extinction number will reach the
peak; Correct article usage
a
however
,it will go down at the end
of the period caused by
human impact and natural events.
Change preposition
of
According to
the first data, the extinction number was about 500 million in 2000 and the numbers kept increasing and predicted in the next 60 years will be 50,000. On the other hand
, the prediction numbers then
plummeted which is estimated at the end
of the period will be in the vicinity of 29,000.
Furthermore
, based on the reason for the extinction of the plant's life, human impact is the highest threat for them which is calculated by 81,3
% Correct your spelling
81.3
whereas
agriculture and harvesting is the prominent effect for the threats (31.1%). Meanwhile, the effect of natural events such
as natural disasters just count
by 18.7%.Change the verb form
counts
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