Nowadays, university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.
In today's society, having at least a
bachelor
degree is considered to be the bare minimum requirement before entering the job market. Employees who only graduate from secondary school can only apply for low-income paying jobs. Change noun form
bachelor's
However
, there are exceptions of successful people
who pursue a career through entrpreneurship
and utilize their talents to make a living and gain their social status. Correct your spelling
entrepreneurship
While
some say education
plays a major part in their success
, some argue that their effort, use of soft skills
and gifted abilities are their
main reason Change the pronoun
the
of
their Change preposition
for
success
. I believe in modern
world, higher Add an article
the modern
education
is not necessary to succeed in life, as it is more important to acquire knowledge and skills
from social experience, not from textbooks.
To begin
with, people
's insight about the future and their global perspective allows them to seek for
opportunities. For startups, it is essential for businessman to grasp opportunities and keep an eye on the global trend, in order to understand the market demand and how their company provide value to the market. Li Ka Shing, a Hong Kong billionaire businessman and investor, missed out on a formal Change preposition
apply
univeristy educatin
himself at Correct your spelling
university education
his
young age. Despite his disadvantage of lower Change the word
a
education
level, as compared to his peers, his vision in investment and business helps him achieve success
, as the richest man in Asia Hong Kong.
Futhermore
, Correct your spelling
Furthermore
university
Correct article usage
a university
education
do
not guarantee the possession of life Correct subject-verb agreement
does
skills
. There are news reports showing that some university graduates do not possess basic self management
Add a hyphen
self-management
skills
, such
as cooking, doing
Correct word choice
and doing
laundries
. Some even do not how to tie their show laces. Nowadays, Fix the agreement mistake
laundry
people
overly rely on their parents to manage everything for them, as a result
of "helicopter
parents" Correct article usage
the "helicopter
phenonmenon
.
Indeed, owning a Correct your spelling
phenomenon
teritary
Correct your spelling
tertiary
education
certificate will certainly assist people
to receive better job offers than those who don't. However
, it is on us whether we have the social experience or life skills
to evolve as an adult and enter the
society as a mature person. It is on us whether we have the global perspective to seek every Correct article usage
apply
chances
to grow and learn, gradually becoming the best version of ourselves and Change to a singular noun
chance
achieve
Wrong verb form
achieving
success
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