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Writing Samples
Band 4

Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result, we cannot trust information we read there. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#anyone #post #news #internet #trust #information
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Most
people
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believed
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 that the
Internet
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 has great access for
people
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 to build
connection
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connections
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 but the
other
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others
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 think that it may not be an accurate site to find
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. I do believe that
people
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 can maintain their communication within the
internet
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 despite its shortcomings.
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provided
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 the social media that
people
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 use
on
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in
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 their daily life
for
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to
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 communicate with others. It is easy access for all
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moreover
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 it is user-friendly.
People
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 can talk to their friends and family just within
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a second
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. It can
also
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 connect
people
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 around the world virtually.
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, many
professor
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professors
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 are now doing a virtual course so the
student
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students
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 do not have to attend their classes physically.
This
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 can cause time efficiency and the student can have additional time to do other things,
lets
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let's
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 say homework or
practical
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a practical
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 job.
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,
people
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is
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often
mistaken
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mistake
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 the
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 they
got
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 from the
internet
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.
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 is mostly
because
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 the lack of accuracy of the
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. False
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 is usually spread on the
internet
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 to cause fear.
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,
people
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that
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who
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used
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use
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internet
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the internet
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 for fraud. They used
others
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others'
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 data to steal
people
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’s money.
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is
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could be the main reason why
people
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 do not totally trust the
Internet
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. Both views are
debateable
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debatable
, but in my opinion, the
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 has so many
benefit
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benefits
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 it can offer. We can reduce the shortcomings that come after the usage of the
Internet
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.
People
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 can start to use the
Internet
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 more wisely and avoid false
information
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 by
double checking
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 the truth behind the
information
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 they have got.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Credibility
  • Verification
  • Misinformation
  • Disinformation
  • Journalistic standards
  • Algorithm
  • Engagement
  • Source discernment
  • Anonymity
  • Traditional news outlets
  • AI and machine learning
  • Reliable sources
  • Unverified information
  • Amplification
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