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The maps illustrate how Meadowside village and font (1962, 1985 and the present).

The maps illustrate how Meadowside village and font (1962, 1985 and the present).
The three blue
print
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 compared
Meadow
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village
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 and
Fonton
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 in 1962, 1985, and now.
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, there have been many changes in the buildings
as well as
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 roads, Meanwhile, there is no
any
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change
in
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 a specific side.
To begin
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 with,
1962
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in 1962
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,
Meadow
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side
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Side Village
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village
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 and
Fonton
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 separated each other
where
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Meadow
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village
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 only had a small path and in
Fonton
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 was a railway. And
then
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, in 1985 the footpath changed into a big main road and connected to
Fonton
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. At
this
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 stage of
process
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, the road has
no
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change
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changed
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 until now. Business
park
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parks
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,
station
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stations
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, and
hotel
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hotels
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 are
in
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between
Fonton
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 and
Meadow
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village
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 where these buildings
have
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were
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 not constructed
in
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from
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 1962 to 1985. Housing estate,
super store
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superstore
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 and leisure complex have been built since 1985,
until
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and until
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 now they have not
modified
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. there
is
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 two railways now than in 1962 and 1985,
which
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and
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 except railway, There is no
any
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building in the north of
Fonton
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form
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from
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 1962
and
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at
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 present.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meadow, village, fonton with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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