The table below shows the percentage of mobile phones owners using various mobile features.

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The table gives data about the proportion of mobile phone owners using various mobile features in 2006, 2008, and 2010.

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, the majority of owners used

telephone

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the telephone

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for making calls

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all times. In 2006 and 2008 it was unchanged in 2010 even though

percentage

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the percentage

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decreased from 100 to 99 it still was the highest compared to others. In 2006 there

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no information about searching the internet and recording video,

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however

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however,

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the time

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time

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it had increased and in 2010 the

rate

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for searching the

internet

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Internet

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was 73 per

cent

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and the

rate

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for recording video was 35 per

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. As can be

seen

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the

rate

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of other features rose over time. In 4 years the percentage of taking photos rose by 10 per

cent

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the

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and the

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percentage of playing games increased by 24 per

cent

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. The proportion of playing music was the lowest among others in 2010, the

rate

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was 12 and despite that it rose over the 4 years it was still the lowest in 2010

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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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167 words

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