The charts show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. In the pie charts, there were four majors given in those years: Computer science, Medicine, Business, and Law.

The charts show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. In the pie charts, there were four majors given in those years: Computer science, Medicine, Business, and Law.
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The pie charts represent how degrees of grants changed at the National University in 1990, 2000 and 2010 .
In addition
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, they demonstrate changes in Computer science, Medicine, Business, and
Law
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in the given period of time.
It is clear that
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in three years, Computer science had almost the highest percentage and
Law
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was the lowest part of all the charts.
According to
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the year 1990, Computer science and Business showed the largest proportions of just under a third each. Between 2000 and 2010, the first degree increased steadily from 40% to 45% respectively
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there was a decrease in the second course from 20% to 15% in the following year.
On the other hand
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, Medicine and
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illustrated 25% and 15% at the beginning of the period, experiencing the lowest proportion of granted degrees.
However
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, Medicine grants surged to 30% in 2000, before dropping by 5%
at the end
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of the period,
whereas
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the shifts in
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declined from 15% to 10% in the first 10 years,
then
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rose to 15% in 2010. The quantity of
last
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course and Business grants was the same by 2010.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • degrees granted
  • majors
  • trends
  • significant increases/decreases
  • stable trends
  • technological advancements
  • job market demand
  • healthcare policies
  • research breakthroughs
  • economic cycles
  • globalization
  • entrepreneurship trends
  • legislation
  • societal issues
  • international policies
  • academic and professional interests
  • implications
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