the diagrams below show the riverpark area of 20 years ago and the riverpark area now

the diagrams below show the riverpark area of 20 years ago and the riverpark area now
The presented
map
gives information about the alteration of the
river
park in the two different periods times. From an
overall
perspective,
it is clear that
significant changes have happened from the past to now. So, numerous buildings have been built on the mentioned site for 20 years. As observed in the details,
while
the one street and railway tracks shown in the
river
park diagram in the past, a lot of buildings have been established here in the new
map
, which includes a supermarket, shops, a college, a post office and birdhouse. As shown in the new
map
, a college, post office and supermarket have been created at the cross of the
river
, as well a library and doctor building have been made next to the post office in the centre of the
map
. The birdhouse is remarkable in the new
river
park.
According to
two diagrams, railway tracks have been remind without changes. In the before
map
, there was a street,
while
many streets have been created in the newer
map
.
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