The provided bar graph presents information on the comparison of international students graduated from universities in various provinces of Canada over a 5 years period.

The provided bar graph presents information on the comparison of international students graduated from universities in various provinces of Canada over a 5 years period.
The chart presents the number of international students
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university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
Overall
, all Canadian universities increased steadily from 2001 and 2006. And
it is clear that
Ontario had the lowest percentage of international graduates.
According to
the chart, between 2001 and 2006, New Brunswick rose by around five
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from approximately 7% to just under 12%. Nova Scotia followed a similar trend growing from just over 6% to approximately 10%.
However
, the most significant change was in British Columbia which began at around 4.5 per
cent
and finished the period slightly over 10 per
cent
.
In contrast
, the rest of the universities in Canada experienced a small rise of between 2
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to 3
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, with the exception of Alberta, which witnessed a slight decrease
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about 2% from just under 6% in 2001 to just over 4% in 2006.
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