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Many parents (mostly women) decide to stay home and take care of the family members instead of going out for work. Some people suggest that they should be paid by the government for doing that. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

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In modern society, it is more common for
women
 to go to
work
 after they get married. It is certainly a trend that double income is becoming common and popular. I totally agree that
women
 need to go to
work
.
However
, I fully disagree that
women
 who take care of family
members
 at home should get paid by the
government
. I am going to discuss why I disagree with
this
 with some reasons and examples based on my experience. I believe that
women
 who do not have a job for a living should not be paid by the
government
. First of all, the
government
 does not have enough ability to pay for all of the
women
 who stay home to take care of family
members
. Because the
government
 has a limit on assets.
For example
, the
government
 should charge more taxes to taxpayers if the
government
 supports
women
 staying home to look after family
members
 and pay for them.
Secondly
,
women
 do not spend all their time looking after family
members
while
 their husbands are working in companies. To illustrate, they have had a long break time since
women
 sent children to school. So it does not mean that
women
work
 for family for a day.
Lastly
,
women
 can do both works. In my experience, my mother took care of me
while
 she went to
work
. It meant
women
 could handle both at the same time.
To sum up
, I fully disagree that the
government
 needs to pay for
women
 who do not have a job for a living. As they are able to carry out both jobs.
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