The graph below gives information about cinema attendance in Australia between 1990 and the present, with projections to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the changes in the percentage of individuals from four different age groups who attended the
cinema
at least once a year over a 20-year period, from 1990 to 2010.
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Overall
, people aged 14–24 consistently recorded the highest Linking Words
cinema
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attendance
throughout the period, Use synonyms
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those over 50 had the lowest figures. Linking Words
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, the proportion of Linking Words
cinema
-goers increased across all age groups over the two decades.
In 1990, the percentage of Use synonyms
cinema
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attendance
among those aged 35–49 and over 50 was 59% and 40%, respectively. During the same year, nearly 90% of individuals aged 14–24 visited the Use synonyms
cinema
, compared to 61% of those aged 25–34.
Between 1990 and 2010, the Use synonyms
attendance
rate for the 14–24 age group remained steady, Use synonyms
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that of the 35–49 and Linking Words
over-50
groups experienced significant growth, reaching 84% and 60%, respectively. Over the same period, Correct your spelling
over 50
attendance
among 25–34-year-olds rose sharply, peaking at 80% between 2000 and 2004 before declining slightly to 72% by 2010.Use synonyms
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