The graph below gives information about cinema attendance in Australia between 1990 and the present, with projections to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about cinema attendance in Australia between 1990 and the present, with projections to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the changes in the percentage of individuals from four different age groups who attended the
cinema
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at least once a year over a 20-year period, from 1990 to 2010.
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, people aged 14–24 consistently recorded the highest
cinema
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attendance
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throughout the period,
while
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those over 50 had the lowest figures.
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, the proportion of
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-goers increased across all age groups over the two decades. In 1990, the percentage of
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attendance
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among those aged 35–49 and over 50 was 59% and 40%, respectively. During the same year, nearly 90% of individuals aged 14–24 visited the
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, compared to 61% of those aged 25–34. Between 1990 and 2010, the
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rate for the 14–24 age group remained steady,
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that of the 35–49 and
over-50
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over 50
groups experienced significant growth, reaching 84% and 60%, respectively. Over the same period,
attendance
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among 25–34-year-olds rose sharply, peaking at 80% between 2000 and 2004 before declining slightly to 72% by 2010.
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