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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The pictures illustrate the alterations to an
airport
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 which will be developed by the next year.
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, We can see that the new scheme involves making a number of changes, mainly in the facilities. The other significant change is
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an expansion
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 of the number of gates in the upgraded
airport
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. The most notable change from the current
airport
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 to the expanded one is
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 of an ATM for the passengers
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 a café preceding the
passport
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control
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 customs.
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, there will be 18 gates available compared to just 8 ones at present, accessible via the sky train enhancing comfort and convenience for
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individuals.
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, the new plan will incorporate a bag drop and a designated area for car rental services.
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, some parts of the
airport
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 will remain unaltered like the
passport
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control
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passport
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 and security
passport
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control
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 which will stay in just the same position.
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, following the security
passport
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control
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, travellers will have the opportunity to explore the shops which offer them some souvenirs or gifts
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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