The chart below gives information about how families on one country spent their weekly income 1968 and in 2018
The bar chart depicts the spending of families' weekly revenues in one country compared
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Overall
,in most cases, people wasted their money on food or leisure in different years among 8 families’ expenses. Linking Words
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, outlays for home goods were the same for both years.
On the one hand, the biggest expenses of families were on meals in 1968, accounting for 35% of weekly income, Linking Words
while
costs of eating were approximately 17% in 2018. Compared to 1968, an enormous amount of money was spent on spare-time activities, accounting for about 22% of weekly revenue in 2018, Linking Words
whereas
outlays for leisure activities were 8% of 7 days income in 2018.
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On the other hand
, the remaining costs were on housing, fuel power, clothing and footwear, personal goods, and transport. In 1968, the amount of money on housing, fuel, clothing and footwear, Linking Words
as well as
on personal goods was more than in 2018, Linking Words
whereas
the costs of remaining activities were more than in 2018.Linking Words
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