The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.
The table gives information about the observation of eight groups of
birds
living in Woodchuck
County in the winter and the summer.
Overall
, while
almost species
of Correct determiner usage
all species
birds
show up in Woodchuck
County in the hot season, only four of them move to this
location in the winter. Also
, three bird types stay here in both seasons.
Seven out of eight bird species fly to Woodchuck
County in the summer, which are bluebirds, cardinals, crows, mockingbirds, orioles, vireos and woodpeckers. In contrast
, only half of them choose to live here in the winter.
To be specified, there are three species observed in both seasons, which are cardinals, crows, and woodpeckers. Otherwise
, bluebirds, mocking
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mockingbirds
birds
, orioles, and vireos are the four groups that can only be seen in the summer. Notably, juncos are the only birds
that just
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Woodchuck
in the cold weather.Submitted by duongngocminh260801 on
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