The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.

The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.
The table gives information about the observation of eight groups of
birds
living in
Woodchuck
County in the winter and the summer.
Overall
,
while
almost
species
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all species
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of
birds
show up in
Woodchuck
County in the hot season, only four of them move to
this
location in the winter.
Also
, three bird types stay here in both seasons. Seven out of eight bird species fly to
Woodchuck
County in the summer, which are bluebirds, cardinals, crows, mockingbirds, orioles, vireos and woodpeckers.
In contrast
, only half of them choose to live here in the winter. To be specified, there are three species observed in both seasons, which are cardinals, crows, and woodpeckers.
Otherwise
, bluebirds,
mocking
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mockingbirds
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birds
, orioles, and vireos are the four groups that can only be seen in the summer. Notably, juncos are the only
birds
that
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apply
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live in
Woodchuck
in the cold weather.
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