News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it he better if more good news was reported

News
editors
decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. There are two factors that influence their decisions. The first is the kind of
customers
they tend
on
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. Because each kind of
readers
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reader
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and
watchers
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watcher
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has its own features.
For example
, if your
customers
are almost teenagers, you have to concentrate on something attracting them
such
as stories, photographs
about
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singer stars, film stars, funny tales, and young fashion. It will be very silly if you try to provide teenagers with economic,
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and politic
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politic
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news
. On the contrary,
besiness
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business
men and politicians may never read
news
about James Blunt or Keira Knightley.
Therefore
, what
influence
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news
editors
’ decisions the most is the taste of their
customers
. The second is the hot, the attraction of
news
. Who will
reads
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or
watchs
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watches
watch
your
news
if it was one year, one month ago even
last
week? The answer is nobody absolutely. In the energetic and competitive world nowadays, people always ask for really new
news
. So
that
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to satisfy
customers
, there is
a
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pressure on all
editors
to find continually what has already happened not only yesterday but even an hour ago. Or else, they will lose their
customers
. None of
editors
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wants that bad future. On television or in
newspaper
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the newspaper
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, we seem to become used to bad
news
. It is a little
of
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difficult for us to meet a piece of good
news
. We can’t deny that bad things occur on the earth day by day.
However
,
news
editors
try to gain more and more
customer
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customers
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, which means more and more money, by bad
news
. Because bad
news
makes us curious. We want to know why it is bad, what it is about, whether it influences us or not.
As a result
, we will buy newspapers or watch television to find out. And the happiest people are, of course,
news
editors
. I think it would be better if more good
news
was reported. Bad
news
makes us worry and sad.
Whereas
good
news
makes us happy. How much bad
news
is, there should be the same amount of good
news
. So, we can give something bad a lot of thought
while
still
be
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joyful with good
news
. Any inequalities between good
news
and bad
news
should be avoided.
That is
the best solution. Now, we can’t live without
news
.
Thereby
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, the role of
news
editors
is very important. We should support them. And what they have to do is try their best to provide us
useful
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with useful
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news
, both good and bad.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Engagement
  • Relevance
  • Urgency
  • Natural disasters
  • Political upheavals
  • Public health concerns
  • Advertising revenue
  • Sponsorship deals
  • Market competition
  • Editorial policies
  • Censorship
  • Newsworthy
  • Desensitization
  • Bad news fatigue
  • Negativity bias
  • Balanced view
  • Social media
  • Viral content
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