News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it he better if more good news was reported

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editors
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decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. There are two factors that influence their decisions. The first is the kind of
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they tend
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. Because each kind of
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and
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has its own features.
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, if your
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are almost teenagers, you have to concentrate on something attracting them
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as stories, photographs
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singer stars, film stars, funny tales, and young fashion. It will be very silly if you try to provide teenagers with economic,
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and politic
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. On the contrary,
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men and politicians may never read
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about James Blunt or Keira Knightley.
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, what
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’ decisions the most is the taste of their
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. The second is the hot, the attraction of
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. Who will
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or
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if it was one year, one month ago even
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week? The answer is nobody absolutely. In the energetic and competitive world nowadays, people always ask for really new
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. So
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to satisfy
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, there is
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pressure on all
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to find continually what has already happened not only yesterday but even an hour ago. Or else, they will lose their
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. None of
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wants that bad future. On television or in
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, we seem to become used to bad
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. It is a little
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difficult for us to meet a piece of good
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. We can’t deny that bad things occur on the earth day by day.
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,
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editors
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try to gain more and more
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, which means more and more money, by bad
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. Because bad
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makes us curious. We want to know why it is bad, what it is about, whether it influences us or not.
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, we will buy newspapers or watch television to find out. And the happiest people are, of course,
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editors
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. I think it would be better if more good
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was reported. Bad
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makes us worry and sad.
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good
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makes us happy. How much bad
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is, there should be the same amount of good
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. So, we can give something bad a lot of thought
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joyful with good
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. Any inequalities between good
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and bad
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should be avoided.
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the best solution. Now, we can’t live without
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.
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, the role of
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editors
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is very important. We should support them. And what they have to do is try their best to provide us
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, both good and bad.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Engagement
  • Relevance
  • Urgency
  • Natural disasters
  • Political upheavals
  • Public health concerns
  • Advertising revenue
  • Sponsorship deals
  • Market competition
  • Editorial policies
  • Censorship
  • Newsworthy
  • Desensitization
  • Bad news fatigue
  • Negativity bias
  • Balanced view
  • Social media
  • Viral content
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