The table shows independent film releases by genre in the UK and Republic of Ireland in 2012.

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The table gives information about different

genres

of independent films released in

two

countries, the UK and Ireland in 2012.

Overall

while

drama and documentary are the

two

film categories that were launched the most in

two

countries in 2012, comedy was the one that earned the highest income among all

genres

. In 2012, the number of drama and documentary movie

releases

were

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both

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35, and these

two

genres

accounted for nearly half of all

releases

However

, their income

were

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quite low, particularly the documentary, which earned only 2.9% from selling tickets.

In contrast

although

comedy was the second most-released film genre

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this

year, with 26 movies, it had the highest revenue from ticket sales among all

genres

. The number of horror and thriller movies launched

were

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quite similar, at 14 and 13, respectively. The other categories were displayed at

much

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lower level as their total

releases

accounted for under 20% of all

releases

. Notably, the least-released category of films was biopic, with only one movie

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released in 2012, accounting for just 0.7% of all launches.

However

, its income is even higher than the one with the most

releases

, drama movies.

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4 paragraphs

194 words

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

The table illustrates
data on
independent film releases
by genre
in the UK and Republic of Ireland
highest number of releases
most popular genre
second most popular
significant number of releases
relatively fewer releases
lowest number of releases
overall
common genres
substantial presence
moderate number of releases
least number of releases
provides insights into
distribution of
across different genres

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