Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
In
life
, happiness
has been considered as very necessary. This
word is difficult to define as a result
of being abstract. Many factors are crucial to achieve it.
Firstly
, this
term has countless ways to be defined and this
can be explained by its personal interpretation. Joy is something ephemeral that arrives usually with details that change our perspective on life
in
that precise moment but its value resides Change preposition
at
on
the fact that it cannot be simplified by words. So you know that you are happy when you cannot explain it to anyone. Change preposition
in
For example
, when my parents brought me to my favourite park when I was young I was so happy that I could not explain it to them with
another way Change preposition
in
that
with a big hug.
Correct word choice
than
Secondly
, it is extremely important to understand that happiness
is the result of a long list of specific factors. To be delighted you often have to completely forgot
the cruel reality and centre only on things that make Change the verb
forget
you
Correct pronoun usage
your
life
worth it. To focus on these aspects and find happiness
it is mandatory that elements like luck and love appear. For instance
, a children
without family and people Fix the agreement mistake
child
that
care Correct pronoun usage
who
and
love him will have more trouble Change preposition
for and
to focus
and Change the verb form
focusing
be
happy in Wrong verb form
being
life
.
To conclude
, happiness
is undefinable with words and each person has his way to conceive
it. Change preposition
of conceiving
However
, we know that there are some aspects that always will help you to achieve it. It is recommended for everyone to search to be happy but without obsessing about it.Submitted by santos_dij on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
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Answer structure for the type of essay
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- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
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- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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