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The process below shows the process of growing and making products from pineapple. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The first part of the diagram illustrates the duration of growing a pineapple,
while
 the second part compares the various procedures for processing these
pineapples
. In general, the size of the
pineapples
 will depend on the type of end product they will be processed into. Fully matured
pineapples
, weighing 2 kilograms and standing at a height of 30
centimeters
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, will be rinsed and
then
 coated with wax for extended storage before they are ready for shipment. For those
pineapples
 that are premature, they will go through the same rinsing process.
However
,
pineapples
 still in their early stage, measuring around 26 cm, will be processed into juice using an extractor.
This
 involves removing the top part and peeling the skin.
In contrast
, the mid-matured
pineapples
 that received chemical treatment between the 7th month and full maturity will be processed into rings or chunks and
then
 canned for future consumption.
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