The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. ,1191ummarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table provides
idea
about the underground railways system in London and five other cities.
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an idea
Overall
, the
London has the longest route of underground Correct article usage
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railway
systems whereas
the highest number of the
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passenger
per year in Fix the agreement mistake
passengers
milliions
was found to be in Correct your spelling
millions
the
Tokyo. The Correct article usage
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kyoto
and Los Change the capitalization
Kyoto
Anglese
carried Correct your spelling
Angeles
approximately
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the approximately
same
number of people.
The route of Correct article usage
the same
railway
ranges from Correct article usage
the railway
maximum
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a maximum
distance
of 394km in the
London to Correct article usage
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shortest
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a shortest
distance
of 11km in the
Kyoto. The Correct article usage
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railway
in the city Washington
DC opened in 1976 has Change preposition
of Washington
the
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a
distance
of 126km but only carries 144 passenger
per year, Change to a plural noun
passengers
these
seems to be the lowest Correct pronoun usage
this
distance to people
ratio.
The newest among the six was Add a hyphen
distance-to-people
the
Los Angeles with only 28km Correct article usage
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carring
50 Correct your spelling
carrying
caring
millions
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million
of
people. A Change preposition
apply
trends
was noticed from the table, the Change the noun form
trend
lastest
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latest
railway
has the distance
of route in decreasing order upto
1976. The Paris and Tokyo caries Correct your spelling
up to
the
huge amount of Correct article usage
a
passenger
. There were mainly the record of Fix the agreement mistake
passengers
railway
established in 1900's . The
Kyoto and Los Angeles carried nearly 50 Correct article usage
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millions
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million passengers
passenger
and had the
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a
distance
in the
proportion of 2:1 respectively.Correct article usage
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