Cities are becoming more and more congested and polluted as the number of private cars increases. What are the advantages and disadvantages of owning a car?

Nowadays , countries are becoming more crowded than before and
as a result
of
this
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the number of cars used in
this
world has increased
therefore
also
the contamination increases . There are many drawbacks and benefits point from
this
.
Moreover
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this
essay will discuss the results of
this
and
also
the advantages and disadvantages of owning a
car
. Carbon dioxide increases with the use of cars or any type of transportation . That means that cars produce By-products when burning fuels to start working. As
result
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of
this
, the earth has started suffering from toxic chemicals .
For instance
,
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every five people one dies from carbon dioxide
therefore
, scientific researchers try to find solutions to solve
this
problem as soon as possible .
Moreover
, China's researchers have been starting research that focuses on producing green Hydrogen which is green fuel which means that it does not produce any type of contamination .
Therefore
,
this
research had success in saving community
life
.
This
is only one drawback of owning a
car
.
In contrast
, there are many pros to getting a
car
, one of the most
benefit
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benefits
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, is that a
car
makes our
life
easier . Looking in more detail in our lives if we do not have a
car
we will not be able to travel , go to school or work , and our activities will be
with
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limiting if we do not have a
car
.
For example
, in poverty countries , there is a man called Ahmad and he has 3 children all of them in school,
while
he works the school time for his children ends, so the children need a bus to back home but because they live in poverty country so they do not have
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to do it only sit and wait , in another
life
if you do not have work your
life
will be stop for a moment . In conclusion, as there are many advantages
as
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a
car
makes
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our
life
easier there are
also
tremendous disadvantages to getting a new
car
as the world becomes more Polluted .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • schedule flexibility
  • privacy
  • commute
  • environmental pollution
  • traffic congestion
  • maintenance costs
  • fuel costs
  • stress
  • crowded areas
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