The table below shows the numbers of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in 5 Australlan for last year. The ple chart below shows percentages of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in the same 5 Australian states.
The table illustrates the quantities of
same day
and overnight visits in national and private clinics in five Australian provinces during the past year with the pie chart indicating Add a hyphen
same-day
proportions
of day stays and night stays for Correct article usage
the proportions
last
year.
In general, there are two types of hospitals
, like
public and private and Change preposition
apply
total
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the total
number
of attendance. Accordingly
, each types
of Change to a singular noun
type
infirmaries
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infirmary
divided
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is divided
as
general and psychiatric.
As can be seen from the table, the Change preposition
into
number
of patients on
the 5 different states varies considerably, Change preposition
in
for example
, the majority (5816 days) of patients belong to the public general sickbays in New South Wales when
the clients of private general Correct word choice
while
hospitals
in South Australia
are rated just 560 days. Private psychiatric clinics were more popular in Victoria, Queensland, Western Australia
and in
South Change preposition
apply
Australia
, but the clients from New South Wales accounts
for a small Correct subject-verb agreement
account
number
of people (213 daya
) in comparison to public psychiatric Correct your spelling
days
hospitals
.
Total
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A total
The total
number
of stays demonstrate
that New South Wales (6842) was popular among the states and the lowest for South Correct subject-verb agreement
demonstrates
Australia
(2209).
It is clear from the pie chart that public overnight
and public same day, each of them Correct your spelling
oversight
are
rated 30% by illustrating them as the most popular in private and public Change the verb form
is
hospitals
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