The table below shows the numbers of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in 5 Australlan for last year. The ple chart below shows percentages of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in the same 5 Australian states.

The table illustrates the quantities of
same day
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and overnight visits in national and private clinics in five Australian provinces during the past year with the pie chart indicating
proportions
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the proportions
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of day stays and night stays for
last
year. In general, there are two types of
hospitals
,
like
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public and private and
total
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the total
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number
of attendance.
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, each
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of
infirmaries
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as
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general and psychiatric. As can be seen from the table, the
number
of patients
on
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in
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the 5 different states varies considerably,
for example
, the majority (5816 days) of patients belong to the public general sickbays in New South Wales
when
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while
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the clients of private general
hospitals
in South
Australia
are rated just 560 days. Private psychiatric clinics were more popular in Victoria, Queensland, Western
Australia
and
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South
Australia
, but the clients from New South Wales
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for a small
number
of people (213
daya
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days
) in comparison to public psychiatric
hospitals
.
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number
of stays
demonstrate
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that New South Wales (6842) was popular among the states and the lowest for South
Australia
(2209). It is clear from the pie chart that public
overnight
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oversight
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and public same day, each of them
are
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rated 30% by illustrating them as the most popular in private and public
hospitals
.
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