The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time.
The
bar
chart
below depicts the total number of males and females in further
education
in the UK, which includes full-time, or part-time studies from 1970 to 1991.
According to
the graph, full-time learning is higher than part-time learning.
According to
the graph, part-time education
for men was not stable as shown in the figure
, starting with 1000 in 1970 and descending in unsteady movement to an average of 700 in 1991. In addition
, the women’s bar
chart
increased in a stable movement starting from 700 in 1970 to almost 1100 in 1991. While
the bar
chart
, in the figure
for full-time education
for men, began from the nearest 100 in 1970 and started increasing to 200 in 1991. The women's bar
chart
started around a figure
of 50 to 200 figure
in 1991.
In conclusion, we could say that the men’s part-time education
bar
chart
has decreased over the years. However
, the women's bar
chart
was the exact opposite. Moreover
, the part-time education
bar
chart
for both men and women has increased and reached the same amount in 1991.Submitted by elshamrifawaz on
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