Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some think that

parents

should teach their offsprings to become a model citizen of

society

,

while

others think that schools

is

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a better place to learn about

this

.

Although

parents

spend more

time

with their

children

, I believe

teachers

have more skills since they are professionals in helping students learn. On the one hand, fathers and mothers spend more

time

with their offspring.

In other words

, they spend almost two-thirds of the day with their

children

, and

thus

, they can educate them about what is right and wrong.

For instance

, Japanese people teach their

children

morals of

society

in a story form before they go to bed, and

as a result

, Japanese

children

are considered as most well-mannered.

However

, I think nowadays many people do not have sufficient

time

to teach their

children

.

On the other hand

,

teachers

have the required skills to teach

children

.

This

is because they are professional in teaching,

therefore

, they can easily help students to become model citizens of

society

.

For example

, in England,

teachers

teach about the adverse impacts of criminal activities which has resulted in a drastic reduction in crimes.

Therefore

, I believe that

teachers

have a greater responsibility to help

children

to become good citizens of

society

. In conclusion, some believe that

parents

should teach their

children

to become good

citizen

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citizens

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,

while

others think

this

responsibility lies with

teachers

.

Although

parents

spend more

time

with their

children

, in my opinion,

teachers

are

well- equipped

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with the skills required to teach

children

.