Chevening is looking for individuals who will be future readers or influencers in their home countries. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your own leadership and influencing skills to support your answer.

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“Outstanding leaders go out of their way to boost the self-esteem of members. If people believe in themselves, it’s amazing what they can accomplish.”
This
is my notion about leadership and the outstanding leader, that’s me. I have 16 lovely
students
in my classroom, including two intellectual disabilities and two autistic children now. Even, an intellectually disabled student couldn’t adjust to
school
life. I heard that she ran out of
school
often
last
year. She hits
students
and teachers when she is angry. Classmates didn’t like her and she was isolated.
Therefore
, I started activities to be close to friends in the class
such
as cooking.
Moreover
, I praised her for growth frequently, and I always told her how she was amazing. She changed her behaviour now. She doesn’t run out of
school
anymore. I succeeded in making her
love
school
and uniting with the community. I think I led my classroom successfully because we
love
each other. In 2021, I led a business named Green Smart
School
at my work. It is the business to change the
school
into an innovative space. I gathered the
opinions
of
students
, teachers, parents and local community commissioners on which way they wanted to change the
school
and put it all together after almost 2 years.
Moreover
, I organized insight tours to watch role models of innovative spaces. There were times when each other had different
opinions
. Whenever they do it, we think about the pros and cons of
opinions
and I lead them to make an optimal choice. In 2022, I discussed with the education office and construction companies whether the decisions on construction were appropriate.
Finally
, my
school
started to tear down the building and build a new innovative
school
. During
this
summer vacation, the temporary
school
which we will live in during the construction period was built, and everyone was satisfied with
this
school
because it reflected their
opinions
. I felt so proud of what I accomplished. My passion for influencing people eventually made me become a teacher. Half of my
students
don’t have parents and live in the orphan. I’m trying to take care of them with
love
because I can see their fear of not being loved. I was invited to the festival of the orphanage annually, and I bought a present for them. When I go to the festival, the kids
love
me so much. I can’t forget what I heard from one student “Thank you for caring for me with
love
, teacher, I will always be with you when you are sad or happy. I
love
you so much, too.”
To sum up
, I am a person who is qualified to lead, understand other people’s feelings well, and communicate with empathy. I learned how to collect the
opinions
of members and move toward the goal by leading my own businesses at
school
. I’m a suitable person to get the Chevening scholarship because I can influence positively to my countless future
students
.
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