The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart
illustrate
Change the verb form
illustrates
that
the allocation of weekly Correct word choice
apply
familes
budgets in Correct your spelling
families
family
a
one country in two different years(1968, 2018).Remove the article
apply
Overall
, as can be seen from the graph Linking Words
that
families spent the largest portion of their Correct pronoun usage
apply
enarning
on Correct your spelling
earnings
earning
food
in 1968, but Use synonyms
leisure
Use synonyms
occpied
the largest portion Correct your spelling
occupied
occupies
in
the household spent weekly Change preposition
of
slaries
.
In 1968, Correct your spelling
salaries
series
food
took the largest Use synonyms
reatio
（35%), which was almost five times the Correct your spelling
ratio
poration
of Correct your spelling
portion
leisure
spent by the Use synonyms
country
household weekly Change noun form
country's
income
. Over the following 50 years, Use synonyms
however
,Linking Words
Correct article usage
the
food
spent figure fell by approximately 17%, Use synonyms
whereas
Linking Words
leisure
spent Use synonyms
rise
by about Replace the word
rose
similar
amount , which became Correct article usage
a similar
to
the largest spent occupied the Change preposition
apply
familes
weekly Correct your spelling
family
income
in 2018. Use synonyms
Then
Linking Words
leisure
Use synonyms
beacame
the Correct your spelling
became
houshold
Correct your spelling
household
in come
spent leader with weekly Correct your spelling
income
slaries
reaching around 23%, and housing Correct your spelling
salaries
series
was
overtook Unnecessary verb
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
food
spent , which increased from 10%(1968) to around 19% in 2018.
Use synonyms
By
Change preposition
On
other
Correct article usage
the other
hands
, there were four items of Fix the agreement mistake
hand
families
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families'
family's
income
spent that decreased or Use synonyms
remain
stable between 1968 and 2018. Fuel and power, clothing and foot, Wrong verb form
remained
Correct word choice
and persomal
persomal
good all declined between 1968 and 2018, from about 6%， 10%,Correct your spelling
personal
7
%, to 4%, 5%,Correct word choice
and 7
4
% respectively. Precisely speaking, household goods Correct word choice
and 4
reamin
stable at approximately 8% Correct your spelling
remain
remained
between
Change preposition
during
this
period., and transport spent in the Linking Words
families
weekly Change noun form
family's
families'
income
increased by 7% to Use synonyms
aboout
14 Correct your spelling
about
at the end
of Linking Words
period
.Add an article
the period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, leisure, income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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