Wich is more important friends or family? Give your opinion with examples

I think it is a very important question because at different ages we, could change our opinion. Both family and

friends

are incredibly important to me, but if I had to choose one, now, I would say that the family is more important to me,

due to

the fact that they have known me all my life and understand me better than anyone else. Absolutely, my Family always supports me in my ups and downs. I know that I can always count on them for love, support and home. They showed me the path to success in the future. When I was a child my brother always helped me at school with homework. If I stayed somewhere deep in the evening I was calm, as he always had my back. My parents helped me to get a good education.

Also

, they supported me when I chose University, paying a good teacher before exams.

On the other hand

friends

bring us different kinds of support and companionship.

Moreover

, at a school age for some children, community family are more important than family. As for me, I always rely on my

friends

for laughter and fun and they help me de-stress and relax. They help me grow up like a person helping me discover new things about myself and learning more about the world. Close

friends

are always hearing you and supporting you in a hard moment. In conclusion, I try to be in balance between

friends

and family, both are essential for my well-being, but my family holds a special place in my heart.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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Unconditional love
Blood relations
Support system
Camaraderie
Life stages
Personal growth
Stability
Sense of belonging
Expatriate
Companionship
Reliability
Kinship
Emotional support
Social networking
Familial ties
Interpersonal relationships
Lifelong bonds
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Wich is more important friends or family? Give your opinion with examples

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