Some people say that drug companies have a responsibility to spend money on researching medicines that will help people in poorer countries. Others say the main responsibility of drug companies is to make money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people argued that

drug

companies

should invest their money

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medical

research

and

drug

discovery to address health issues in developing countries,

while

others suggested that prioritizing their profitability should be their main focus.

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I can understand the two opposing points of view and it is a controversial issue which deserves an in-depth discussion. On the one hand, it is undeniable that

drug

companies

are part of an industry

that is

characterized by high risk and high reward. Perhaps the most recent example was the introduction of the mRNA vaccine after the outburst of

pandemic

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. The stocks of the

companies

rocketed, leading to profits for investors worldwide.

Although

drug

companies

bring many benefits

for

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shareholders through earning money, I believe that

it

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can do more for the general public and

further

improve the quality of life in poorer areas.

On the other hand

, I share the concerns of people who think that pharmaceutical

companies

should shoulder the responsibility of investing in medical

research

and

drug

discovery. It is a big concern that most of the

research

institutes and laboratories doing basic

research

in Taiwan are unable to obtain enough

fundings

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. The cooperation between industry and academia is of utmost importance, as

drug

development relies on the basic study of molecular pathways and immune responses.

Furthermore

, the development and marketing of drugs often involve patenting

drug

recipes and techniques, which

lead

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to the high prices of medical resources

that

is

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undoubtedly a huge hindrance for poor people.

Therefore

, I believe that publishing

drug

components and techniques will definitely improve health concerns in developing countries. In conclusion,

while

earning money is indeed desirable for

companies

worldwide, investing in medical

research

may benefit the health of all mankind.